Monday, December 2, 2013

Of Love : Spark in the Dark!!

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 44; the forty-fourth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

Hold on my hands
and my heart
Their lies the world
Abandon the rest.

Lead onto the path
of no sullen looks and dismay
only the smiles
that last up-to the million miles.

The moments precious
between me and you
love flourishes
as the tenderness is true.

The warmth of presence
sooner or later
and fear of absence,
the bond shall grow stronger.

The said and unsaid
whispers in the ear
Of the gentle
the none else shall hear.

You are beautiful
and the mesmerizing one
the feelings intense
in the sparkling eyes.

The love that turns
in the ways
that you have never endured
in the running past.

The longer walks
along the ways
that shall be mesmerized
all through the coming days.

Hold on my hands
and my heart
Their lies the world
Abandon the rest.

- Nandini Garg

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16 comments:

  1. Well written poem describing the nuances of romantic love. :) Nice read.

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    1. Thanks for dropping by and the wonderful words of praise! :)

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    1. Thankyou Amit! Great to have you on my page! :)

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  3. Ah! What a poem Nandini. I like the way you repeated the first para as the last para. Too good. Good luck and keep writing for BAT. I have tagged you here for a BlogAdda contest. I would be happy to read your response.

    Note: Kindly disable word verification and enable comment moderation.

    Someone is Special

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    1. Congrats on winning Blog-a-Ton!!!

      Someone is Special

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    2. Thankyou Sarav! :)
      and i have made the changes!

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    3. Thanks. I hope you will acknowledge the tag in your post :) Please let me know :)

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    1. Thanks for appreciation! :)
      Glad that you dropped by.

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  5. Very beautiful words Nandini, glad to have stumbled upon your blog. Its been long since i have blogged nything poetic. Infact recently i made a post Recap 2013- wanted to make it rhyming - but cud not set the right tone.
    It takes efforts to write in rhymes, Respect.

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    1. Thankyou for so beautiful words of appreciation, Viyoma! :)

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